Showing posts with label poetry. Show all posts
Showing posts with label poetry. Show all posts

Sunday, October 30, 2011

Broken Heart Lake

One evening a few weeks (maybe even a month!) ago I managed to get myself out of the house to go to yoga at Bally’s gym, only to find when I got there that it had been cancelled. Looking for a place where I could walk alone safely, I found myself at Creve Coeur Park, a beautiful but busy place a few miles from our home in Maryland Heights.

I’d been working on a unit of lessons about Lewis and Clark and learning a lot about the rich history of Missouri. As I walked the path beside the big lake, I breathed in the cool air and enjoyed the soft October light. A few bicycles whizzed by. I passed women in running pants with arm bands hooked to I-pods and kissing couples out for an evening stroll.



On my left a sign caught my eye that said “Dripping Springs ~ Scene of the tragic death of the lovelorn Indian girl whose broken heart is said to have given the lake it’s sorrowful name, “Creve Coeur”.

In all my fifteen years in St. Louis, I’d never heard this story! I was so pleased with my discovery that I made Jeremy and Sophia return to the park with me a few weeks later so I could take some photos. At the time I was hoping to capture the beauty of fall, but it was a little early.




In the end it was my husband who captured most of the images. He went into full-on nature photographer mode. As he shot, I secretly promised myself that one day I’ll know the names of Missouri trees and wildflowers, like a real poet.










These are the infamous “Dripping Springs” up close:




As a writer and would-be poet it’s hard to pass up such a story, so I’ll share some of the thoughts I jotted in my notebook thinking it might make a poem one day:


Broken Heart Lake

Late October sunset
at Dripping Springs.

Sliver of moon rising,
her sweet ghost hovers
beside me.

Silver light
glistens off the
tears on her cheek.

Winter is on its way,
she knows he’s
never coming back.

Only jagged rocks
remember the name of a native girl,
whose sorrow gave birth
to a lake.

***

Sunday, July 31, 2011

Snapshots from Lake Erie

I’ve been doing something unusual for me in my writing lately. It’s kind of half-journal, half poetry. I don’t claim to be a serious poet, it’s just another way for me to “lay track” for myself as a writer. It was fun to capture the moment with Sophia when we visited Lake Erie with my husband’s brother and his wife. This is the journal version before it gets edited for the poetry critique group I just joined!


The day we went to the beach
at Lake Erie
Jin-hui packed turkey sandwiches,
plump, dark purple cherries
and neon orange Cheetos.


We picnicked while Sophia
cried as though the sand
was an angry monster
ready to gobble her whole.


The waves were bigger than the ones I knew
from the cold North Sea of my childhood,
the surprise taste of fresh
instead of salt water on my tongue.

In the lake, I hold my daughter
tight against my chest and
unbearable possibilities.

But she flails and wails,
“I wanna do it
by my  Self!”

Reluctant, I let go
just enough to give equal parts
safety and
freedom.


Her small body
floats gently in my arms
and on the waves
as they roll under us
towards the future.



“Look, I’m swimming mama!”
Her head tilts towards the sun,
her laughter for a moment
drowning the sound of the sea.